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from saumya kumar abby chole tiaain
it was asome everyone great job
jayraj farrar
congratalations 2B.I loved when the teacher was stuck.
from saumya kumar 1w!........
i like your story it is cool i like the part when the teacher got stuck on the slide
saumya kumar 1w!
well done 2b that was funny and cool panited nails
i liked your story and cool by saumya kumar
BPS Bookrap Heroes
We liked your story. The funny part was when Jack pulled the teacher's shoes off, the play equipment was a funny place to paint your nails! Well done everyone did a GREAT job.
Anu Bhullar and her cousin Rabnoor Pandher Caddies Creek PS
Well done 2B that was a brilliant story about the teriffic teacher and the twenty-two kids.It was more better than the tall man and the twelve babies.That was brilliant........Good on you!
Ruben(2B)'s uncle
Very funny and exciting :-).
Annie @ ccps
Top jop 2Bright i love when the trrific teacher got stuck.bye bye for now that was cool;p
taman
2B tha twas brilliant and i liked when the jaks were pulling your shoose.
Tara and Jemma Thompson
I realized Mrs Briant was holding on to the slide.
jemma thompson
that was too funny when the techer
was stuck in the slid
Ryan
cute
Harjot Gill 2H Caddies Creek PS
Great thinking about making masks and the names.When the teacher it was funny. The complacation (problem) was good but could be a bit better.I think it was different to everyone else's digital story. That was smashing 2B!
tanavs family
good team work 2b.It was really good effort
ianmclean
Oh this is very clever! We love the idea of the face masks! Congratulations from Penrith PS.
Daniel and Mrs Giardina
wow 2B what a great job loved the way you all worked together you all looked excellent.Well Done!!!!!
TANAV 2B
WONDERFULL 2B.It was good team work and it was really fun doing that.your music was great and we enjoyed it so mush.
Ruben's Family
What a team work!!!
It was fun to watch......keep up the good work. :D
Adrian's Family
Great digital story, 2Bright! We loved the little Jack sleeping at the end! :)
Rabnoor Pandher
Very well done 2Brights.I just kept on watching your story and it was very creative....Good on you!
Parisa Farrar 2Rockstars
Very well done 2Brights.I mostly loved the bit when the Jacks won't listen and when the Rocky's painted your nails.good work.
Maddison and Abbey
It was funny when the terrific teacher got stuck in the slide...HaHAHaHaHAHAHaHaHaHa.
Thomas and Ryan
Smashing job 2B. Thomas and Ryan really liked it!!
micheleyoung
The Fantastic Foxes thought that this story was just great. We all laughed and laughed. We liked the part when the Roxys were pulling Jack's hair and when the Roxys were painting the terrific teacher's nails.
Mr Beggs
What a terrific teacher, and what lovely Jacks and Roxys! I'm glad they all learned to play nicely. Congratulations 2Brilliant!
Kempsey Kids
That was a very funny story. We're pleased the poor teacher wasn't stuck there forever!! We're glad she found Jack who was missing and we thought it was funny when they were trying to get the teacher out of the slide. We think she would have been pleased to get home that day!
2Rockstars @ Caddies Creek PS
Congratulations Class 2Bright!!! We enjoyed your story very much especially the part where the terrific teacher got stuck on the slide! It made us laugh. Your story was a little bit different from the others as you actually starred in your own show! It must have been fun.
2G and 2H Caddies Creek PS
What a fantasticstory! We loved it when the Roxys were painting the teachers finger nails and when she was stuck on the slide. Hahaha. The masks were very creative. Well done 2B!
Justin.moreno 2r
2Bight that was TERRRIFIC all of you looked cool. I loved the part when the girls panted the teacher. I hop the teacher was not inprest. GOOD WORK 2Bight
Simran
Well done Mrs Bryant and kids its very impressive and funny.I wish i wasnt sick that day so i could join all of you.You all did great job. :)
Abeer from class 2G at Caddies Creek Public School
COOL! B-)
victoria
wow! 2b that was really cool i liked the part when the girls were painting the teachers nails.well done.B-0 B-) hope you all had fun making the movie.
Mrs Scheffers (Teacher Librarian, Caddies Creek PS)
Congratulations Class 2B & Mrs Bryant! What a funny and creative digital story. I love your masks. I'm so pleased the teacher wasn't stuck on the slide forever!
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Created by Class 2Bright from Caddies Creek P.S. in Term 3 2011. Story based on "The Tall Man and the Twelve Babies" written by T. Niland Champion and Kilmney Niland, (Allen Unwin: 2010).
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In a little, little classroom in a big, big school
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sat a great terrific teacher and 22 kids.
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Everyday the terrific teacher counted her 22 kids.1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-11-12-13-14-15-16-17-18-19-20-21-22 kids... and then she taught them to do drama.
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All the boys were called Jack. All the girls were called Roxy.
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When the 22 kids were learning they all sounded energetic.
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When the 22 kids were bored they all moaned and groaned together. Sometimes the terrific teacher moaned and groaned too.
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One sunny afternoon the 22 kids were very, very lively, playing in the playground. Roxy was poking her tongue out at Jack. Jack was tackling Roxy. Roxy was pulling Jack's hair. Jack was climbing backwards up the slide.
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“Roxy, Jack! Stop messing around!” Said the terrific teacher. But no one was listening.
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The terrific teacher lined up the Roxys and played follow the leader. Up the stairs, along the bridge and down the slide.
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“Oh NO I’m stuck!!!”
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“Quick! Jack,” The terrific teacher called. “Come and help me!” But the Jacks were busy.
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“Oh drats!!!” said the terrific teacher.
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She stretched her long, long arms to reach the top but her arms were not long enough.
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The kids were delighted! The Roxys were painting her nails.
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The Jacks were pulling her shoes off.
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‘Jack! Roxy! Get me out!” The terrific teacher shouted. So the Roxys pulled one way
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and the Jacks pulled the other way. But the terrific teacher didn’t budge. “STOP! You’ll pull me in two!!!”
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“Jack pull and Roxy push on the count of three,” yelled the terrific teacher
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“1-2-3.....”
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WHOOOOOOOOSH... The terrific teacher slid down the slide followed by the sliding Roxys.
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The terrific teacher was so happy to be safe at the bottom of the slide with her 22 kids. She walked around and gave them all a Caddies Credit, one by one.
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Every Roxy. Every Jack.
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That afternoon, the terrific teacher taught them to play nicely and counted her 22 kids. 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-11-12-13-14-15-16-17-18-19-20-21 kids...
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“Uh oh.... where’s Jack?
