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1/2S English, Penrith PS Thank you for a great digital story. We are now in suspense! We liked how Fernice turned around to transform and we loved the yellow laser rays.
1H @ Penrith PS You did some great work. We loved the slideshow. It was pretty awesome how the yellow alien turned into one of Monloc's species.
Tristan Bancks Great to see what Penrith PS is up to. "Monloc the protector" is fun!
Emma Quay Superb character illustrations.
Therese Kenny Too cute! Shaun Tan's inspirational influence definitely comes through in characters. Love the little twist at the end, too! Would enjoy seeing/reading a sequel one day. Great work!
The Tentacled Yo-yos of Penrith PS Hey there fellow Stage 3 rappers!
We have just watched your amazing digital story about Monloc. The soundtrack was fantastic! Monloc and his sidekick were cool aliens. Some of us were surprised when Fernice revealed her true appearance. We are worried about the question mark at the end. Does this mean that Bermu-3 will turn evil in the sequel? Does the sidekick know all on Monloc's secrets?
ianmclean This digital story was inspired by the graphic novels and animated films of Shaun Tan. Characters and storyline were created - and uploaded on June 29, 2011 - as part of a book rap. Created by the Lost Bottle Cap Collectors of Penrith PS, aka Zain, Amy, Quinn, John & Christian. The slideshow earned 1180 views before the PhotoPeach site crashed in December 2012, but has now been restored at this new URL.
ianmclean a rusty, broken-down spaceship...
ianmclean Once upon a galaxy...
ianmclean carried evil Stingus to the land of Australia.
ianmclean Stingus wanted to build the ultimate weapon, using Earth's core as a power source.
ianmclean His mission was to destroy Monloc!
ianmclean Monloc was a friendly alien who had decided that he had to protect Earth.
ianmclean Monloc's trusty sidekick pet was Bermu-3.
ianmclean Years before, Monloc had come to Australia. "I like what I see," he said.
ianmclean Stingus had found the blueprints of his ultimate weapon.
ianmclean Stingus constructed his weapon.
ianmclean Stingus took aim at some famous Sydney buildings.
ianmclean "Stop!" said Monloc.
ianmclean Monloc shot giant, fiery laser rays at Stingus and his weapon.
ianmclean "Bermu-3, you must add your laser to my beams."
ianmclean But... there was another strange alien watching from the long grass.
ianmclean The new alien added her own laser rays to the battle.
ianmclean Stingus has been destroyed. Earth has been saved again!
ianmclean "I am Fernice," said the new alien.
ianmclean Monloc said, "I thought I was an endangered species, the last of my kind.
ianmclean THE END. Or is it?