KF @ Penrith PS We really liked this new story about Noni the Pony. It was our favourite slideshow.
Nafisa great work guys
2Bright @Caddies Creek P.S. And again we like the ending when the polarbear had orange spots on his back.Well done!
Class 2Grateful, Caddies Creek PS Very well done Penrith Rappers. We enjoyed how the polar bear got his orange spots and when Noni woke up the grizzly bear. Thanks for such a creative and enjoyable digital story.
2/3C Narrabri West PS That was fantastic! We really enjoyed your story and we loved your pictures/graphics. Your story was well written and you cleverly used rhyming words. We think you deserve a round of applause! *****(clapping). Thank you for sharing such an entertaining rap.
ianmclean Thanks Caddies Creek PS for all the comments. The Stage 1 rappers who come from 1H were extra excited about the music Photo Peach offered us, because they know how to play the "Nutcracker Suite" music with their recorders! They practise every day with the IWB.
2Heavenly @ Caddies Creek PS :) It was SO CLEVER how you created your digital story. We enjoyed the music from the "Nutcracker". We liked the part at the end where the polar bear had orange spots on his body. Zootastic fun Penrith Rappers!
2Powerful @ Caddies Creek PS Hi Penrith Rappers, where did you get all those great ideas from? We liked how the Polar Bear had orange spots at the end. We also enjoyed the clever rhyming and the graceful music. Your digital story was superb!
2Rockstars @Caddies Creek PS We think your new adventure for Noni the pony was fabulous! It was clever how you made all the cages for the animals. We especially liked the ending with the polar bear and his orange spots! An amazing story!
Mrs S Well done, girls and boys! A great sequel to Noni the Pony.
2Bright @ Caddies Creek Public School We love your rhyming and the ending of your story with the polar bear and his orange spots.It was great to see that most of the animals were friendly towards Noni.Top job!
Katherine Haratsis I loved the story, especially the animal characters. They seemed very friendly. Perhaps they could be my friend, too?
mrsschenkel Thanks Penrith students! The children on Campus have loved this. Mrs Schenkel @ Aberfoyle Park
Bankstown Bookrap Heroes Hello Noni, The Bankstown Bookrap Heroes are wondering if you were scared of the polar bear? We liked how your story rhymed. We thought you did a good job with your story, it was well presented.
Liz Jorgensen Great work. Your story about her finding new friends will be very popular with fans of Noni the Pony. Thanks.
allhallows I like it. It's very creative. Well Done!!!
Lizzie Chase Good on you Ian and students!!!!
Mrs McLellan and Kempsey Kids Great work, we loved the story. We're going to try to make one of our own next week!
dottl Clever and funny. Thanks for sharing. Mrs F
Mrs Scheffers Teacher Librarian Caddies Creek PS CONGRATULATIONS Stage 1 Book Rappers and Mr McLean- what a fun story! "Noni the pony" is a very special picture book.I know the students and staff here at Caddies Creek PS will LOVE viewing your clever digital story. Well done!
1S English at Penrith PS Good job everyone. We enjoyed the way you put it all together. Our favourite part was when the pony met the polar bear. Your rhyming words were SOOOOOO clever!
Colleen Collins Well done to you all. Very creative students (and teacher-librarian).
Judy Miller This is fabulous! What creative students you've got.
Cath Keane I enjoyed your slideshow very much Stage 1 rappers. I love the polar bear's orange spots! Noni the pony is a terrific book to share with friends.
ianmclean Created by the Stage 1 book rappers of Penrith Public School in Term 3, 2011. Based on the CBCA shortlisted picture book, "Noni the pony" by Alison Lester (Allen & Unwin, 2010).
ianmclean Noni goes back to the snow and ice.
ianmclean She thought the polar bear was really nice.
ianmclean "I've got a surprise for you..."
ianmclean "... I know you like dots!"
ianmclean "Do you like my new orange spots?"
ianmclean THE END.
ianmclean Noni hears snoring...
ianmclean from a grizzly bear.
ianmclean "You woke me up! Don't you care?"
ianmclean Here is the elephant eating hay...
ianmclean "Would you like some?"
ianmclean Noni says, "Neigh."
ianmclean "May I come in, too?"
ianmclean She asks him politely:
ianmclean a polar bear.
ianmclean Noni said.
ianmclean and asks of him:
ianmclean First, Noni finds a Komodo lizard...
ianmclean "Are you a wizard?"
ianmclean Then, Noni sees...
ianmclean "You'd look good with orange hair."
ianmclean "What's that thing growing out of your head?"
ianmclean "You are a rhino..."
ianmclean She meets a hippo...
ianmclean "May I come in and have a swim?"
ianmclean Noni's tail is the colour of honey...
ianmclean "I could go to the zoo. I have enough money."
ianmclean "There are animals in the zoo..."